keep it up!

I see you haven't any trouble using layers and if your really a noob...I'd have to say good job, only as from my personal xp. If you don't put a plot to it you'll prob. get blammed, but dont let that discourage you... I say keep it up, I think u have the potential. Well any way good try, keep it up you'll get it.

Funny

The point itself was funny as hell..lol im still laughin good job

Great

I love your use of black and white with the color for weapons and blood, since I have A twisted mind I'd have to say this is not only interesting but genius. good Job...keep it up I want to see more.